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Run.
Faster.
Fall down.
Cry.
Monsters are following you, they tell you to die.

Scream.
Bleed.
Hide.
Smile.
Smile as long as you can, it won't last for a while.

Insane.
Worthless.
Angry.
Mad.
You're not normal, my friend, that's all in your head.

Tears.
Blood.
Fears.
Pain.
Don't cry, you stupid child, it will start again and again.

"Talk to us.
Talk to us!
Listen to us.
We tell the truth!"
Life or Death? You need to choose.

Weak.
Laugh.
Cry.
You're mad.
It was too much for you and now you're dead.

Dead.
Dead.
Dead.
You're dead.
And no one will be sad.
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:iconender-shade:
ender-shade Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
... I'm a monster...
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:iconsirifintland:
sirifintland Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
cool, but... sad
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you. 
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:iconsirifintland:
sirifintland Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
welcome! ^^
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:iconrusticromance69:
RusticRomance69 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Freaky, but awesome.
Indeed, freaky awesome.
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you ^^
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:iconrusticromance69:
RusticRomance69 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
^ *
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:iconbuddhagirl12:
Buddhagirl12 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Writer
tears
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
(:
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:iconbuddhagirl12:
Buddhagirl12 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Writer
(:
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:iconxxemogingerwolfxx:
xxEmoGingerWolfxx Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
wow...This is really beautiful. I..can't put words to it.
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Aw thank you.
And thanks for the fave :]
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:iconxxemogingerwolfxx:
xxEmoGingerWolfxx Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
no problem :) You're welcome
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:iconyellowgrin:
YellowGrin Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Forgot to comment.^^;
That was very beautiful in a dark way, I love it!
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
haha it's okay
i'm glad that you like it :]
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:iconlacharmeureuse:
LaCharmeureuse Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nicely done. I like your style. I also read this in multiple voices. There were different voices saying different things it sounds like to me. I really like this one. A lot.
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
thank you
i'm glad that you like it :]
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:iconlady-mystiana:
Lady-Mystiana Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Monster is a popular topic.
Nicely done.
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you
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:iconlady-mystiana:
Lady-Mystiana Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Your welcome.
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:iconfungifromyuggoth:
FungiFromYuggoth Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
even though this is not my mother tongue i can clearly see this is quiet good :)
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks
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:icontiganusi:
tiganusi Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional
ONLY WANNA SEE YOU BATHING IN THEM CRIMSON TEARS.
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Heh
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:iconazumi-tan:
Azumi-tan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
wow......just..... beautiful!!! *^*
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you :]
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:iconurpoliitikko:
Urpoliitikko Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well, if no ones sad then it's alright. :D
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah...
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:iconpurplefire1400:
purplefire1400 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
That was deep
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:icongalickmaster:
galickmaster Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Wow. Great Rythym
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks
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:iconrho96:
Rho96 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow..... Just wow.... AMAZING!!!! :heart:
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you :]
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:iconrho96:
Rho96 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome!!!! :D
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:iconseize-the-stars:
Seize-the-Stars Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Depressing, but a very good use of rhyme and rhythm. I like it!
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks.
I'm glad that you like it. :]
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:iconxdragonbloodx:
xDragonBloodx Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i don't know why, but this thing made me feel... strange
it's amazing, i feel like i need to draw something with this theme .w.
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you.
Haha okay :]
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:iconxdragonbloodx:
xDragonBloodx Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem
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:iconlizzy-666:
LIZZY-666 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
I never was that interested in poetry but I think I just found my favorite poem.
It shows the feelings I sometimes have so well..
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Wow thank you!
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:iconlizzy-666:
LIZZY-666 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
You're welcome ^^
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:iconenemom:
Enemom Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
......
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
What?
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:icontarinalintu:
Tarinalintu Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sometimes one may feel like this.
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah.
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:iconjewelf0x:
jewelf0x Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Death to us all.
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Okay.
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:iconkillianw:
killianw Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
duuuude...any chance i could use some of this as, like, a chant for...idk, some future enemy in one of my stories? i'd give credit, of course. this is...i'm not normally a fan of this, for lack of a better term, emo kid poetry but this is bloody brilliant.
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:iconinsomniac-corpse:
Insomniac-Corpse Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Of course you can. :]
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